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Follies of Youth: Harry Potter Fic

  • Jun. 18th, 2008 at 12:45 PM
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Author: Bitterfig
Title: Follies of Youth
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Minerva McGonagall/Tom Riddle Jr.
Summary: Like most of us, Minerva McGonagall had her youthful indiscretions.
Beta Reader: Fedink
Word Count: 445
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Explicit sexual content.
Author’s Note: Written for the porn_battle prompt “Harry Potter, Minerva/Tom Riddle, Youthful Mistakes”




Follies of Youth

 

 

As a young woman Minerva McGonagall’s mind had been quick as lightening and sharp as a blade.  Lately she was frustrated at how slowly it moved.  As a young woman her face had been smooth and fair, in those days she had been able to take for granted health, strength and the shapeliness of her body.  And yet she considered age a blessing.  Bright and lovely as she had been in her flower she had been unwise.  She had made mistakes as the young so often do.  Mistakes of grave consequence. 

 

Tom was her mistake.  Tom Riddle who became Voldemort, the Dark Lord. 

 

How handsome he had been.  The dark wave of his hair rich against his pale face, his lips ripe red as a girl’s, his eyes dark yet flashing red, like garnets.  As a young teacher, scarcely older than her students, she wore long grey skirts to lend her an air of dignity.  As if she knew what that was then.  She would sneak her lover to her quarters and he would lift those skirts whispering “pussy cat, pussy cat where have you been.”  She would laugh and meow as he stoked the triangle of fur between her thighs.  First with finger then with tongue, he would stroke her slit, draw out juices and moans until she was begging for him inside her, begging for his cock.

 

His cock.  How magnificent it had been, long, thick and full of life.  Hard and tender all at once.  He called it his serpent, called the milky fluid that leaked from it venom.  He might have called it Gertrude for all Minerva cared.  Climbing on top of him, on top of his cock she would ride him.  Her prim schoolmarm’s bun would come undone, her ink black hair flow down her back in a crooked tail.  Riding him she would forget past and future, nothing mattered except her body and the pleasure he gave her.

 

She had known what he was, even then.  That he was twisted, cruel and ambitious, that he would only grow more dangerous with time.  She had known but she had chosen to ignore the truth because he was beautiful, because when he looked at her, touched her, she was beautiful too.  He was hateful, so full of hate but he made her come in crescendos like flame dancing. 

 

She knew better now.   She had put aside the mistakes of her youth.  Yet she hoped she would never be tested, that he would never come to her again with his eyes, his lips, his tongue, his cock.  She was older now and wiser but there are some things that cannot be forgotten.


 

Comments

[info]etrangere wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 12:26 am (UTC)
Lovely writing!
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 05:45 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much.
[info]yinepu wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 01:18 am (UTC)
Beautiful!
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 05:45 pm (UTC)
Thank you.
[info]bitchygrrl wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 02:38 am (UTC)
Wonderful.
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 05:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you.
[info]tekalynn wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 06:10 am (UTC)
Snake and cat. Hot and sad. (This is turning into bad Seuss, but I hope you get what I mean.)
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 05:42 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it.
[info]redshoeson wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 12:08 pm (UTC)
Here via [info]hetfic. Nicely done here - your descriptions are excellent: unique and spot-on simultaneously. I love that Tom says, "pussy cat, pussy cat where have you been" - it seems so in character for Minerva to enjoy this. Really, quite well done.
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 05:41 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
[info]bkm5191 wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 01:09 pm (UTC)
that was lovely, maybe not the topic, but the ay you wrote it was gorgeous. I love the way it flowed.
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 05:40 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much.
[info]lash_larue wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 07:53 pm (UTC)
Perhaps I have missed some things, but it is wonderful to read your words again.

Very powerful story, and beautiful as always.

L
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2008 09:19 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much.
[info]angelmischa wrote:
Jun. 21st, 2008 10:27 pm (UTC)
Wonderful. I have a particular liking for this pairing! This is a great little short example of it. I've recced it here for people who might have never experienced the pairing before: http://community.livejournal.com/the_new_library/59962.html?mode=reply
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Jun. 23rd, 2008 04:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for your recommendation. I'm really pleased to know you liked this.
[info]pica_scribit wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2008 05:02 am (UTC)
That was really nice. But I thought Minerva and Tom were contemporaries at Hogwarts? She wouldn't have been teaching him, would she?
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2008 12:16 pm (UTC)
Thank you. According to the Lexicon Minerva is a year older than Tom-- I didn't intend this to be read as a student/teacher relationship, though I do see this as happening after their school days when they were in their early 20's. When I refer to her as "a young teacher scarcely older than her students" I didn't mean it to imply that he was her student. Maybe I should rewrite it to make that clearer... it was a pretty hastily dashed off flash fic.
[info]aaronlisa wrote:
Aug. 7th, 2008 11:54 pm (UTC)
This was really well-written and the imagery is very powerful.

[info]bitterfic wrote:
Aug. 8th, 2008 01:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much.

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