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Author: Bitterfig
Title: Without the Raven or the Swan
Fandom: Princess Tutu
Pairing: Ahiru/Rue
Summary: Tutu and Kraehe take off the costumes of the Swan and the Raven to face each other as Ahiru and Rue.
Beta-Reader: Fedink
Word Count: 364
Rating: R
Warnings: Sexual Content
Author’s Note: Written for the 3rd round of porn_battle for the prompt “strip ballet.”  This is being used for [info]100_women prompt #28: naked.  My complete 100_women progress chart is here.
Disclaimer: The following is a work of fiction. Any illegal acts taking place within that fiction are NOT condoned by the author. Depictions of any questionable, illegal, or potentially illegal activity in said fiction does not mean that I condone, promote, support, participate in, or approve of said activity. I grasp the distinction between fiction and reality and trust that readers will do the same. I do not profit from the fan fiction I write, and all rights to the characters remain firmly in the hands of their creator.


Without the Raven or the Swan

 

 

Tutu met Princess Kraehe’s fury with serene understanding.  She spoke calmly as her hands traced graceful arabesques. 

 

“You don’t need to disguise and protect yourself with the dark feathers of the Raven,” Tutu said.  “You are beautiful without them.  You don’t need to be a cruel princess decked out in shadows.  It is enough for you to just be Rue.”  

 

“If I wrap myself up in the Raven, you hide behind the Swan,” Kraehe sneered.  “Could you stand before me naked as your true self?”  Then she laughed a harsh caw.  “I’ll show you mine if you show me yours, Princess Tutu.”

 

In answer, Tutu turned a pirouette and her crown and headdress disappeared.  Another and her wings dissolved.  Kraehe narrowed her ruby eyes and not to be outdone she too began to dance, spinning, and shedding pieces of her ensemble with each turn.

 

So they whirled and twirled and stripped away the guises of the Raven and the Swan.  Only when their slippers vanished did they stop and face each other. 

 

They were just themselves.  Not Kraehe and Tutu but Ahiru and Rue, without costumes or disguises, with nothing to conceal them from each other.  Rue reached out to touch Ahiru’s hair.  It was the first time she had seen it loose, unbraided.  It was golden orange, almost as long as Ahiru was tall, wispy fine as the feathers of a new chick. 

 

As she stroked the silky veil of Ahiru’s hair, Rue’s breasts brushed against the other girl.  As they did, Ahiru hung her head and wrapped her arms around herself to cover her flat little chest. 

 

“Don’t,” Rue whispered, gently moving her arms away.  “Don’t be ashamed.  You were the one who said it was enough, to be ourselves.”  Her fingers brushed Ahiru’s tiny breasts then her whole hands engulfed them.  “You’re lovely Ahiru, lovely.”  Tentatively Ahiru reached out to Rue, mirroring her caresses as if it were a dance class exercise. 

 

Perhaps it was, a kind of dance, a form of education for them both, to see each other, to see themselves in the other, to touch, to feel, to move together as they did pared down to the essence.

Comments

[info]tl__dr wrote:
Apr. 8th, 2008 10:26 pm (UTC)
I don't have an insanejournal so I requested this anonymously and feedbacked it anonymously over there...so let me just delurk now and say I *love* this! The premise is incredibly in-character, with Ahiru so gentle in the face of Rue's challenging confrontational-ness, and this section:

Rue reached out to touch Ahiru’s hair. It was the first time she had seen it loose, unbraided. It was golden orange, almost as long as Ahiru was tall, wispy fine as the feathers of a new chick.



As she stroked the silky veil of Ahiru’s hair, Rue’s breasts brushed against the other girl. As they did, Ahiru hung her head and wrapped her arms around herself to cover her flat little chest.



“Don’t,” Rue whispered, gently moving her arms away. “Don’t be ashamed. You were the one who said it was enough, to be ourselves.” Her fingers brushed Ahiru’s tiny breasts then her whole hands engulfed them. “You’re lovely Ahiru, lovely.” Tentatively Ahiru reached out to Rue, mirroring her caresses as if it were a dance class exercise.


was just so utterly lovely. Wonderful job!

It's the first Tutu/Kraehe I've read, too, and as I've adored this pairing from the beginning that makes it that extra bit of delightful. Thank you for writing this!
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Apr. 13th, 2008 03:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I'm so glad you liked this, did you do all the Princess Tutu prompts at porn_battle? I was so happy to see yaoi, yuri and poly prompts for the fandom, I'm a little disappointed at how little same-sex stuff I've seen in the Tutu fandom given the massive amount of subtext. I would have liked to do a couple more of the prompts but didn't have time, I was very intrigued by the idea of Lile/Pike (I harbor a secret desire to write Lile/Pike/Ahiru).
[info]tl__dr wrote:
Apr. 14th, 2008 12:50 am (UTC)
Haha, yes all those prompts were mine. My writer's block is damn near permanent, so all the wonderful subtext I see between pretty much every conceivable pairing combination in the series I have to keep my fingers crossed will be explored by other people. Basically:

I'm a little disappointed at how little same-sex stuff I've seen in the Tutu fandom given the massive amount of subtext

Me too! I mean, Fakir/Ahiru is a wonderful, wonderful pairing, so I'm delighted that fandom has embraced the obvious subtext and chosen to fic them regularly, but considering how much subtext there was with every other character (Ahiru/Rue, Fakir/Mytho, Ahiru/Lilie/Pique absolutely definitely, Fakir/Autor, Ahiru/Edel-san no really!, of course Ahiru/Mytho...even Ahiru/Freya, the blonde flower power girl) it does make me sad how little other and especially same-sex fic there is. I crave it!

And if you write Lilie/Pique/Ahiru you will pretty much become my personal superhero. omg :)
[info]smilingbomb wrote:
Apr. 8th, 2008 10:50 pm (UTC)
This is just way too gorgeous.

Very very impressive!
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Apr. 9th, 2008 02:46 am (UTC)
Thank you so much.
[info]puchiko2 wrote:
Apr. 9th, 2008 01:15 am (UTC)
this was so tasteful and so so so well done, i LOVE it! FINALLY some Ahiru/Rue!
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Apr. 9th, 2008 02:46 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. I am kind of surprised at how little Princess Tutu yuri (and even yaoi) I've seen. It might just be that I'm not looking in the right places.
[info]yuliee wrote:
Apr. 9th, 2008 02:20 am (UTC)
Hum.. Very nice, almost transcending the actual femslash in a way. I also usually never say this about slash.. well, anything, so this is rare. XD;

(Since you seem to be a fan of such writing, may I suggest a series to you? NANA would make a great base for this kind of thing.)
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Apr. 9th, 2008 02:39 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked the story. I've looked up Nana and it does sound really interesting, the idea of these two very different women who mirror each other. Do you recommend the manga or the anime series?
[info]yuliee wrote:
Apr. 9th, 2008 03:22 am (UTC)
The manga lasts longer and is better by far, though it pains me to admit the borderline yuri doesn't really go anywhere. Haha.. Characters constantly comment on how close their relationship is, but aside from maybe one little happening or two there's nothing. (That is what fanfiction is for though, eh?)

Though, in my experience some have found the artwork hard to stomach at first because of how sharp and lanky her characters seem; if this is a problem for you I'd suggest starting with the anime and then reading onward in the manga where it left off.

You could go ahead with Viz's official translations but they're released painfully slow.. near half of the fandom goes off of scanlations alone, so if you don't have a problem with those, I'd suggest using them. (Of course, being that the anime is currently only accessible through fansubs, I don't see why you would.)
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Apr. 13th, 2008 03:50 pm (UTC)
Thanks, I'll have to look it up. I can probably get scanlations on [info]free_manga. I have an issue of Shojo Beat with a chapter of Nana in it and I actually like the look of the art.
[info]haleysings wrote:
Apr. 9th, 2008 05:08 am (UTC)
You know, a friend of mine that isn't into Tutu actually heard about this fic and told me about it.

I must say, the images in my head at the phrase "strip ballet" were, well, no where near as pretty as this. XD Excellent job!
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2008 12:18 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it.
[info]etrangere wrote:
Apr. 9th, 2008 11:59 am (UTC)
Lovely!
[info]bitterfic wrote:
Apr. 10th, 2008 12:17 am (UTC)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
[info]enuwey wrote:
May. 6th, 2009 02:30 am (UTC)
Yay! Princess Tutu Yuri! I'm happy now.
[info]bitterfic wrote:
May. 6th, 2009 11:44 am (UTC)
Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.

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